Showing posts with label gasoline. Show all posts
Showing posts with label gasoline. Show all posts

15 May 2013

An Amalgamation / Buying Tactics / Ribbons (3x)







Typed in a green way
on my Torpedo 18a

Reading over this again, I realise how awful my grammar is. In the second paragraph, the sentences are too monotonous. In the third, I totally change ideas in the middle of a sentence. I'm going to work on preserving continuity.